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love how it's all one gradation

great use of negative space

wow (o_o)

Not only is it a silhouette (something even pros have difficulty pulling off), but it is sharply detailed AND it tells a story.

Keep drawing like that. You'll make big money ;)

great job

Love how actually made his eyes asymmetrical. That really adds life to the character. Your outlines are powerful and the gradations are super crispy. Also, the most difficult thing to draw in the world are hands and the hand of the suave guy is drawn flawlessly.

Great Job! :)

zigan responds:

Thank you. I have a problem with hands as well, it took me a few times to get the perspective of the hand right, it's something you have to be real careful with. >_<

This is your best work

But you still have a lot to learn. Work on that anatomy more. His chest looks more like a jacket. Work on your rhythm too. There's a book called Composition by Arthur Dow, it should cover all the basics you need to know about rhythm in Art.

sweetyluli responds:

That would be interesting. I wonder how'd it would look if I tried a painterly style like this again. 🤔

nice colors, but its too cropped

it would have been dope if we could have seen the rest of his body. You tend to have the bad habit of focusing way too much attention to the face and eyes. Because of this, the heads looks detached from the rest of the body. Also, the outlines are too weak, make them BOLDER.

get rid of the filter

also, the rhythm is way off. His arm is too squeezed in. The face looks detached from the rest of his body. His tummy and arms are out of proportion. You need to work on your anatomy a lot more. I recommend finding the book Artistic Anatomy by Joseph Sheppard.

this is the best lion you did so far

you got rid of those 'twins' this time.

Notice how much more powerful the drawing is in comparison to the others.

My only gripe with this one is to make the action more extreme. the Lion should be really clawing on the floor trying to escape the man grabbing his tail. Make that hand grab harder too. This is a scene that demands intense emotion so don't be afraid to be bold with it.

wise-irbis responds:

it is not lion. snow leopard.

i did my best. this is old work.
thanks )

quite an improvement from the last one

but I'm still seeing those 'twins'

the arms are at the same level, and the paws are doing the same thing
again

get rid of that bad habit okay

wise-irbis responds:

twins, ha. again )
i think for this time it's ok. i like this pose, it's natural.

thanks

too many twins

your lion is well designed.

However, he suffer's from 'twins'

note how his left eye is doing exactly the same thing as his right.

also note how both his paws are also doing the same thing

avoid these dreaded 'twins' next time if you want to make a more solid drawing

wise-irbis responds:

yeah, i know about that. thanks. i just like this expression.
and he is a snow leopard )

another victim of the 'anime-itis'

try to go as far away from Japan as you can. google up Tinga Tinga paintings, get references from Latin America, renaissance Germany, Russia, anywhere but Japan!

the body's rhythm is messed up. Don't just focus on the details of the face. Think of the body as the whole!

Get serious because there's a lot for you to gain here.

Age 40, Male

Corcoran College of Art

Baltimore, Maryland

Joined on 11/24/09

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