You have chosen your samples wisely. However, you tend to start slow and depend too much on building your beat up. Also, develop your variations more. Listening to the same eight or so notes over and over can get quite tiring. I recommend you check out the works of Yuzo Koshiro of Streets of Rage fame. Also, look up an ost for the Genesis game Verytex. Take note on how their tracks tend to repeat a series of notes throughout, but they spice it up to keep us hooked.
Thanks! I will! I really appreciate the feedback.
You went a little too much with this rendition. The original rendition was very quiet and graceful. I was a little disappointed by this very bombastic approach. Hotaru is a very shy and timid girl. Someone who's face would get flustered if a boy were to show even a hint of affection. Her music should really capture this innocent aspect of her personality.
The segments where you did the nature narrator were the best. Your voice is very nonchalant. I felt like I was listening to the spawn of HAL 9000 at times.
the transissions, the bass, just amazingly dope song.
Keep up the good work
Ruben -Acid Paradox-
love the bold transissions
the sudden jolt at 0:13 is just perfect. Keep up the good work
Thanks, that took me a while to figure out how to do that. :)
loving the clean samples
BUT, I found the piece a little boring and lacking energy.
keep trying, you got some serious potential!
Thanks, will have to get a better programe sooner or later. I know what you mean.
it's too tinny. make the sounds cleaner
it needs work
the melody is too repetitive. Change it up
Yeh I know that its very repetitive i'll try to make a second Version of this Song with more variety.
love the melody, keep it up!
Thanks for the review :)
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