not bad
I love the soft delicate feel of this character. Great costume too. However, don't be afraid to add more contrast. Without it , the illustration lacks a sense of depth, a big no no if you want to show this for a portfolio review.
Also, try challenging yourself by drawing things that you're not comfortable drawing. A great exercise for you would be to practice drawing bikes and lots of them. That will definitely help you boost your soft and delicate style to new heights.
nice brushstrokes
Love how the shirt has a lot of intense energy. But the blah face feels like it doesn't belong in this drawing. Art is all about thesis so if there's something that doesn't fit with it, the message losses power.
Well done
Not only do I see the guts, but I 'feel' their slimy goodness. That's not easy to do and you've done it flawlessly. Good job.
Great textures and lighting
The dragons look really good too. Unfortunately, the girl's pose is way too lukewarm. A great tip-a-roo to solve this problem is to look for video/pictures of Michael Jackson dancing. Note how he fully commits to his gestures, they are never wishy washy.
Great job, keep practicing.
lol, this was the pose the client wanted. Thanks though.
hey hey, not bad
My challenge for you is to go as far away from anime as you can. I want you to be insanely creative next time. Don't show me what you like, show me WHO YOU ARE and what makes you DIFFERENT from anyone else. I don't want to see imitation, I want to see something ONLY YOU can pull off.
That's a tough angle to get right.
I commend you for your effort. This is a tough angle to catch. I'm pretty sure you'll get even better with practice.
Don't give your toons a backache
The posture of your characters are too stiff. Work on your s-curves more. Loosen up that line of action to give these girls some swing.
Be careful with your placement
By putting Scarlette so low in the stage like you did, you made her appear short. Great colors though.
All I can say is, this piece looks great as a print on my wall.. ;]
The long composition doesn't really change how I view the character, so I'm afraid I can't see how you get the same effect. :\
gotta focus more
make the red of the background darker because the girl's is getting lost.
It's like writing an essay. Establish the girl as your thesis and make sure the other stuff don't rob our attention away from her.
Age 40, Male
Corcoran College of Art
Baltimore, Maryland
Joined on 11/24/09
After Cloudia 
Half-Pipe. 
Dead Womb 
The Kitemaster 
spandex 
October in Ecstacy Flowers 
Serving sizes 
Scarlette High 
Holly. 