studiobelieve's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[MoonLight]

This is your best work

But you still have a lot to learn. Work on that anatomy more. His chest looks more like a jacket. Work on your rhythm too. There's a book called Composition by Arthur Dow, it should cover all the basics you need to know about rhythm in Art.

sweetyluli responds:

That would be interesting. I wonder how'd it would look if I tried a painterly style like this again. 🤔

[KaiAttack]

nice colors, but its too cropped

it would have been dope if we could have seen the rest of his body. You tend to have the bad habit of focusing way too much attention to the face and eyes. Because of this, the heads looks detached from the rest of the body. Also, the outlines are too weak, make them BOLDER.

[WhitY]

get rid of the filter

also, the rhythm is way off. His arm is too squeezed in. The face looks detached from the rest of his body. His tummy and arms are out of proportion. You need to work on your anatomy a lot more. I recommend finding the book Artistic Anatomy by Joseph Sheppard.

[Mr. Youhaveto]

this is the best lion you did so far

you got rid of those 'twins' this time.

Notice how much more powerful the drawing is in comparison to the others.

My only gripe with this one is to make the action more extreme. the Lion should be really clawing on the floor trying to escape the man grabbing his tail. Make that hand grab harder too. This is a scene that demands intense emotion so don't be afraid to be bold with it.

wise-irbis responds:

it is not lion. snow leopard.

i did my best. this is old work.
thanks )

[snow]

quite an improvement from the last one

but I'm still seeing those 'twins'

the arms are at the same level, and the paws are doing the same thing
again

get rid of that bad habit okay

wise-irbis responds:

twins, ha. again )
i think for this time it's ok. i like this pose, it's natural.

thanks

[Crystal radcliffe]

another victim of the 'anime-itis'

try to go as far away from Japan as you can. google up Tinga Tinga paintings, get references from Latin America, renaissance Germany, Russia, anywhere but Japan!

the body's rhythm is messed up. Don't just focus on the details of the face. Think of the body as the whole!

Get serious because there's a lot for you to gain here.

[let'sa go!]

grindhouse mario ftw!

great composition with strong rhythm, really loving that grungy texture.

keep up the good work :)

dommi-fresh responds:

will do captain.

[demon girl]

I love it :)

You have an amazing talent designing with flat tones.

That's something a lot of illustrators can't do, they always have to do gradations.

keep up the good work