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This is your niche

Of all your pieces, this one really gives me the best impression of who you are. Most of your other works focus solely on your obsession for anime. I'm not saying that you should not admire other people's work. What I'm challenging you to do is to do work that talks more about you than about the things you like. Keep expressing your own ideas and work on your own style. Don't give me what others think, I want to SEE what YOU think.

Do more skeletons

You obviously improved on the anatomy for this one. The skeleton version of this illustration is far more interesting than your normal anime style.

Therefore do a lot more skeleton illustrations. Not only will they help you improve your normal anime style, but Art Professors prefer these kinds of submissions when looking at a student's portfolio.

Work on your anatomy and contrast

The way the girl is posing looks very uncomfy. Go google an image of a real life swimsuit model who is doing the pose you were going for. Then use the real life counterpart as a reference.

Also, the colors you chose for the girl don't harmonize with the background well. In the real world, light REFLECTS. So we should be able to see the dark colors of the fish and the swamp reflected on the girl's skin and clothing

gotta focus more

make the red of the background darker because the girl's is getting lost.

It's like writing an essay. Establish the girl as your thesis and make sure the other stuff don't rob our attention away from her.

sometimes less is more

the design is very well done, however what's that grey thing in the bottom right corner? Also try making a version without the orange ball in the lower left.

Don't try to put too much, instead limit your focus on the girl and rainbow since they are the most important parts of this illustration.

woah nelly!

It looks exactly like the illustrations from the Capcom artists! :)

You're very talented, but I'm interested in seeing how well you can draw without any cartoon or video game influences.

Don't get stuck in anime limbo, be crazy, be daring, be brave!

head's feels detached

when drawing a character, always start with the torso and hip first. Every other part such as the head must relate to the torso and hip because they are the largest parts of our body.

nice shadows

you're a gifted artist and I respect your talent.

sorry if my last comment offended you, I just want you to make the awesome art that I know you are capable of making.

keep growing, keep practicing, and don't give up on your God given gift.

I can really see your love for anime in your works

but here's the problem:

your work only tells me about what you LIKE. They don't tell me a thing about WHO YOU ARE. Art is like writing an essay on life. What do you think life is? What is your opinion on good or evil? How do you think the world ended up the way it is?

Your art should be 'visual answers' to questions like those.

great contours on the eyes

but make sure to give the other contours just as much love. Again, your focusing way too much on the face. The collarbone is too stiff due to a lack of anatomy. Work on your backgrounds too. Find books on art anatomy at the library and study them hard.

Age 39, Male

Corcoran College of Art

Baltimore, Maryland

Joined on 11/24/09

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